Friday, June 01, 2007

Another slightly morose haiku

Familiar stranger:
Sad, thoughtful, much older than me.
Face in the mirror.

2 comments:

EARTHLING said...

I think that's how we all feel at one time or another. What is worth remembering at all times, is that someone somewhere else is older, sadder, AND uglier. It always makes me smile!

Froog said...

I've just noticed I messed up the syllable count in the middle line.

I suppose I need to omit "much" (although I like it). Or maybe substitute something like "wise" for "thoughtful".....